Ms. Evans and Ms. Brentano's ClassroomOn this page you will find poems by students in our class. These students range in age from 6 years old to 9 years old. They have all participated in Writing Workshop developing their skills as writers in several different kinds of genres that include personal narrative, small moments and poetry. The students chose for themselves what they wanted to have on this page. We hope you enjoy their work. |
Our Turtles |
In the woods |
Ms young | |
Summer | |
BUGS |
My Cats
By: Cindy |
THE SEA SHORE |
The future |
| Snow By: Dylan The snow is like a big cotton ball that is fluffy and white. When the snow falls and covers the ground, It is a beautiful sight. You can make igloos, snow forts, snowballs, and snow cubes. Sometimes the snow freezes and forms icesicles That hang down from your house and look like tubes. It is fun to go sledding, especially down a hill, But after you get up, you get a big chill. |
HOME By: Elizabeth Home reminds me of bed. Bed reminds me of dreams. Dreams remind me of fun. Fun reminds me of games. Games remind me of outside. Outside reminds me of animals. Animals remind me of pets. Pets remind me of my cats. My cats remind me of home. |
Jordan By: Jordan Jordan likes computers. He runs at recess. His best friends are Logan and Blake. Jordan is cool and smart. |
Trains By: Josh The top looks like a straw Whenever I here it coming I here a whistle I see a steaming Frog hoping Down the railroad The smoke smell Bursting I feel a moving earthquak Steaming towards me I hear repeating sound of saics And that is a train |
Mountains By: Katelyn The top, Like the sharp point of A pencil. The grass, Is like a 3-dimensional Sheet. The climb to the top, Is like climbing up the side of a Building. The sky, Is like a sheet of painted glass Hanging From the top of the World. The beautiful flowers, Are like diamonds and pearls Growing Out of the Ground. A mountain, Is amazing. A mountain, Is beautiful. A mountain, Is an adventure That no mind Can understand. |
Dolphins By: Katelyn Dolphins, Dolphins Jumping in the air Dolphins, Dolphins Swimming everywhere Dolphins, Dolphins Playing on a sunny day Dolphins, Dolphins Everywhere Dolphins, Dolphins No time to spare! |
Seasons By: Katelyn Winter, fall, Summer, spring Snow, snow Rake leaves, Play outside, Flowers please! Seasons, seasons Fun, fun, fun 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1! | |
Read By: Katelyn Magic castle, Baseball star, Chinese New Year, Computer experts, Construction men, Learning, Adventure, Mystery, Fiction, Reading can Be a serious Addiction! |
Blake By: Logan Hunting Playing computer games Sharing memories Going to each other houses Playing tag Best friends Blake |
Whistling By: Lydia I can Jump, laugh, Skip and play. I can read And write. But when I try to Whistle I Just don't Do it Quite right. I shape My lips The proper Way but All that comes out Is air. It just is not Fair. My dad Can whistle My mom can too, But I Just can Not do. Mom, dad Will I Ever be able to whistle too? I can Not whistle Boo! Hoo! |
Loose Tooth By: Maddie The loose tooth Alex, Maddie, Mom and Dad Saw the loose tooth I lost my tooth in the sink I was bleeding I threw my tooth in the desk. |
Frogs By: Max Frogs Live in a different places Jumping in ponds Swimming in the lakes Frogs are cute | |
The way I feel By: Molly Sometimes I feel Happy. Sometimes I feel Sad. Sometimes I feel Doubtful. Sometimes I feel Mad. Sometimes I feel Carefree. Sometimes I feel Foolish. Sometimes I feel Embarrassed. Sometimes I feel Coolish. | |
Cats and dogs By: Philip Bark bark Fight fight Sleep sleep Lazy all Dya long They like To slep But i Don't/ get Up play Play weve Played all Day now Its time For bed The end. |
Coat By: Philip 2/7/07 Coat coat I love My new Coat I Got it From a Nice store And I Want to Wear it For three More years Striat exept For the Summer cose I don't Need a Jacket much In the Winter the End. |
The Jungle By: Reanna 1-11-07 The green Grass is Like the Jungle in My classroom The people Are like MONKEYS In the Jungle the Monkeys are CRAZY. |
Stickers By: Sable Stickers stickers Every where Sticking here Sticking there Sticking tape to the cracks on the Walls When I drop a sticker It sticks to the floor They stick to the envelope They stick to me Stickers are fun Do you like stickers? |
Crash By: Sean Crash Bump Crash Bump On The Wall Crash In The Trash. |
By: Tristan Stars are beautiful, stars are Wonderful, heard of twinkle, twinkle Little star? It's true it does look like A diamond in the sky. |
School By: Renan I like my school I like my inside recess I like my lunch. I like computers I like getting doc'd I like show and tell. I like my school |
Hoos By: Ana-Claire Hoos here and there, hoos coming every where Coming from Different towns.They're coming from any where. Where are they Coming from?They're coming from hoo ville Ahhh they are still coming I do not want you in my town. Shoo go away I do not want you in my town. So go away I mean it. |
The woods By: Unknown The woods Are scary The woods, Are dark I hate The woods I like The woods Sometimes, but Most of The time I'm scared But sometimes I have to fase My fears Yahoo I Made it The end. |
Christmas Tree Lights By: Paige Christmas tree lights Christmas tree lights Are like the roses in Moon light and Sun lights Christmas tree lights Can be red white Blue pink and purple Christmas tree are Like pretty snow flakes On the tree I like Christmas Tree lights as Much as ice cream. |